FOIA Request and Escalation Template
Three documents and two sheets that scope every request against the agency's own structure, then escalate to match what actually happened.
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Escalation Note
Three requests, three different postures, three different correct moves
| Request | What happened | Correct move |
|---|---|---|
| R-03 | Partial denial issued | Appeal the exemption cited |
| R-05 | Silent past its deadline | Skip the appeal, escalate to the Public Liaison, then OGIS |
| R-06 | Burden objection, invites narrowing | Negotiate the scope, no appeal needed |
Defaulting to “wait, then appeal” would have been the right call for exactly one of these three.
A FOIA request has to clear one bar before an agency has to search for anything: it must “reasonably describe” the records sought. The Office of Government Information Services names what actually fails that test, and it is rarely an unreasonable ask. It is a request missing a time frame, the office or system that holds the record, the record type, or the specific project or program it relates to. A request an agency would locate in minutes still gets returned for being too vague to start a search.
The pack is three documents and two sheets and one rule. Request Register scores every request against the agency's own component list and prior release log before Request Letter is drafted, then counts the statutory clock. The next move depends on what actually happened once a response arrives. A real denial goes to Appeal Letter. A request gone silent past its deadline is already deemed exhausted, and skips straight to the agency's FOIA Public Liaison. A genuine burden objection gets negotiated rather than fought, and Escalation Note decides which applies.
Every sheet ships filled in for one programme: six requests from the Kestrel Policy Institute to four components of one invented department in a single grant cycle. Two are rewritten for scope before they are sent. One comes back an appealable denial. One goes silent past its deadline and proceeds straight to OGIS mediation instead of a wasted appeal. One draws a burden objection, resolved by narrowing the scope. Open the pack in River and the clock, the log and the decision run as requests move, the same discipline behind a consultation's own numbered questions.
What's in the pack
Request Register sheet
One row per request: the scope check performed before filing, the date received, the counted statutory deadline, and the current status.
Response Tracker sheet
Every contact from the agency, logged against what it actually does to the clock: starts it, extends it, ends it, or has no effect at all.
Request Letter
A scope check section that runs the request against the agency's own component list and prior releases before a word of the ask is drafted.
Appeal Letter
Argues the specific exemption or search-adequacy ground an actual determination cited, and asks by name for a segregability finding.
Escalation Note
Decides the next move from what Response Tracker shows actually happened: a real denial to Appeal Letter, silence to the Public Liaison and OGIS, a burden objection to negotiation.
Scope it before you send it, escalate to match what happened
The standing space rule every prompt reads first. It blocks the one response the statute treats as working against a requester: defaulting to “appeal” against a request that was never actually denied.
How to use it
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Open in River, or download it
Open the pack in River and the agent scopes your first request with you against the agency's own structure, or download the blank letters and sheets and start from the worked example instead.
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Scope every request first
Check the agency's component list and its FOIA library of prior releases for the time frame, office, record type and programme your request needs, then write Request Letter against what you find, not a guess.
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Count the clock, log every response
Log the filing date in Request Register, count the statutory clock against the federal holiday schedule, and log every reply from the agency in Response Tracker against what it actually does to that date.
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Escalate to match what happened
Once a request is denied, silent past its deadline, or met with a burden objection, let Escalation Note pick the move: appeal the exemption, escalate to the Public Liaison, or negotiate the scope already offered.
Frequently asked questions
Is this template free?
Yes. Download the whole pack as Word documents and CSV sheets with no signup and no credit card. Edit with AI is a separate, optional path that has the agent scope your own requests and track the clock with you. The template library holds the rest of the packs this catalog ships.
What format are the downloaded files?
Word documents for the three letters and notes, and CSV for the two sheets, in one zip. They open in Word, Pages, Google Docs, Excel, Numbers and Sheets with nothing to convert. Inside River the same content opens as live Docs and Sheets that update as requests move.
How is this different from a sample FOIA request letter?
A sample letter, including the government's own, tells you to describe the records reasonably and stops there. Request Register runs that same check against the agency's own component list and prior release log before the letter is written. Escalation Note then routes what happens next by what the agency actually did.
My request has gone silent. Do I still need to file an appeal?
No. Under 5 U.S.C. 552(a)(6)(C)(i), your administrative remedies are already deemed exhausted the moment the statutory deadline passes with no determination. Writing an appeal argues with a decision that does not exist. Escalation Note routes this case to the agency's FOIA Public Liaison first, then the Office of Government Information Services.
What does OGIS mediation actually do?
OGIS offers a voluntary, neutral mediation service between a requester and an agency, not an advocate for either side. It can help move a stalled request or clarify a dispute. It cannot compel a release, and asking for it does not close off going to court, which stays available the whole time mediation runs.
How is this different from the other FOIA template on this site?
The pack at FOIA Request and Deadline Tracker is built for a news-media requester chasing a specific delivery format and the fees a missed deadline removes. This pack is built around scoping a request before it bounces and choosing the right escalation path once it does not, for any requester.
What happens to the records once they arrive?
That is separate work this pack hands off rather than duplicates. A released record that turns out to be a proposed rule feeds the obligations it creates, and one that supports or contradicts a party's claimed position feeds a stakeholder position map. Either way, this pack's job ends at the release.
Scope it before you send it, escalate to match what happened
Send the agency and the records you need. The scope check runs before anything is filed, and the escalation path is decided by what actually happens next.
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